Corderro and the Good Shepherd

i'd wandered again staring 
into streams of livid pools waving 
raptures of rushing currents startled 
beyond such graveness however tempted 
to explore even more than before i'd missed 
your pondering about awaiting my dashing exit 

away from the flock that scattered sparingly 
my temperament craved so much more 
why the gravity along led me by surprise 
with curiosity and grace your demeanor 
seemed to shield my immature nature 
calmly beyond a single sphere a certain 

chastisement lingering gently between 
the stone pavement a white stick hidden 
gestures being heard only throughout 
the babbling brooks gnashing against 
large pebbles into solid foundations 
henceforth creating distance an yet forming
 
a pulley blending mind body and soul into 
thrashing madness mingling timelessly chafed 
and bruised chanting i'm back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/8/2013 7:50:00 AM
- A nice poem to read ... Thank you Yolanda ! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/15/2024 3:12:00 AM
Sending hugs just found your comment I was in the hospital on this day.
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