Copper and Silver

copper and silver

copper colored winds
 green leaves suddenly silver 
  sallow ochre shades

8/23/20
Haiku Color with Alliteration
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 2:46 AM
- A great color choice ... beautifully described, Sam :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Was getting kind of tired of the usual color choices - thought this might be fun! Thank you for your message and best wishes. You are always so encouraging. hugs back to you..
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 12:46 AM
Love the imagery Sam. Have sent Soupmail Over Fork Over Tom
Kauffman Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 9:59 AM
THANK YOU not only for your wonderful compliment but for your soup mail! So grateful! Over Fork Over!
Watt Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 10:22 PM
Hi Sam, you are a magician with haiku. I can just feel that colored wind blowing on the flag above McCovey Cove. Check out my email. Grace and peace ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 11:25 PM
Thank you! So appreciate your wonderful messages. Tried to respond to your soup mail but my response wouldn't "send!" More craziness in the outfield! Will try again tomorrow in the am! Sleep well.
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