Copper

My unintentional stare Fine sand grains everywhere Salty sea drips from her hair Oil’s scent fills the air

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 8:57:00 PM

ok, I am back to here going from bottom this time. I read all your page one. ONe day I will try to read another page! Have a good friday, it's my favorite day of the week!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2011 4:34:00 PM

Beautiful one, Robb. Well, my goal was to finish your whole page of little poems but hubbie is almost home for dinner so I gotta scram. Once in a while I like to find a poet to "pick on" heehee. I'll try to see the rest of this page later.Luv, Andra

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2011 6:52:00 PM

excellent poem, in this form Robb, enjoyed this. Harry

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/13/2011 10:24:00 AM

nice one, no one in our salty sea, with all this awful snow about