Copper

My unintentional stare
Fine sand grains everywhere
Salty sea drips from her hair

Oil’s scent fills the air
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:57 PM
ok, I am back to here going from bottom this time. I read all your page one. ONe day I will try to read another page! Have a good friday, it's my favorite day of the week!
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January 26, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Beautiful one, Robb. Well, my goal was to finish your whole page of little poems but hubbie is almost home for dinner so I gotta scram. Once in a while I like to find a poet to "pick on" heehee. I'll try to see the rest of this page later.Luv, Andra
Horsman Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:52 PM
excellent poem, in this form Robb, enjoyed this. Harry
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 10:24 AM
nice one, no one in our salty sea, with all this awful snow about
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