Get Your Premium Membership

Coordinated

“Your hat's all wrong”, she said, “On the wrong side of your head”. “To the mirror”, she commanded. Discovered I was now left-handed. I removed the hat with discretion, Found myself without direction. Realizing the magnitude of my loss, I valued the lines I could not cross.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/8/2018 2:33:00 PM
Reading this with more appreciation now :) Cute poem about coordinate systems.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thanks. Below the surface, the poem is about a topic from mathematics.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2018 6:26:00 PM
I enjoyed this cute little story, Jim. Thanks for visiting my poetry the other day.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things