Cooped

Cooped in a bedroom
Somewhere nestled deep in London
The scattered leaves; naked in their stargazing
Catching precious fragments of air 
Skeletal between wind and water
Let them litter the street with their extroverted intentions
Cooped in a bedroom
A small shoe box extracts nature to its core
Forcing redundant leaves to partake in private dances
With no eyes fixed upon them. All the world watching four walls
A trinket of light, a celestial womb sliding lid from shy boundaries
No noise radiates; nothing moves to cloud the silhouetted substance
Until time begins to tick and the cardboard loses its nesting nature versus nurture
A small grey flint sparked into the world, a youthful pidgeon
Plummeting freefall into the atmospheric pull, dust
Light departed leaving nothing but suburbs
Standing like mannequins, coifed and taylored
The empty immortal womb and nothing left.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 6:39 PM
'...sliding lid from shy boundaries,' '...standing like mannequins, coifed and taylored,' ...vivid, visceral phrasing! Full of stunning imagery and language. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Caliri Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:53 AM
This seems outrageously good. Keep it up!
P. Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 7:19 AM
thank you Nathaniel... you are just too kind!! and this write is very interesting... i don't know if i said this before... but your descriptions are just wonderful and easy to actually picture the scene of your writes... this is an excellent talent you possess!! and you got the emotive part right in 'nature's wonder' ... take care! ~ Arany
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