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Cooped in a bedroom Somewhere nestled deep in London The scattered leaves; naked in their stargazing Catching precious fragments of air Skeletal between wind and water Let them litter the street with their extroverted intentions Cooped in a bedroom A small shoe box extracts nature to its core Forcing redundant leaves to partake in private dances With no eyes fixed upon them. All the world watching four walls A trinket of light, a celestial womb sliding lid from shy boundaries No noise radiates; nothing moves to cloud the silhouetted substance Until time begins to tick and the cardboard loses its nesting nature versus nurture A small grey flint sparked into the world, a youthful pidgeon Plummeting freefall into the atmospheric pull, dust Light departed leaving nothing but suburbs Standing like mannequins, coifed and taylored The empty immortal womb and nothing left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 6:39:00 PM
'...sliding lid from shy boundaries,' '...standing like mannequins, coifed and taylored,' ...vivid, visceral phrasing! Full of stunning imagery and language. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/29/2009 10:53:00 AM
This seems outrageously good. Keep it up!
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Date: 3/28/2009 7:19:00 AM
thank you Nathaniel... you are just too kind!! and this write is very interesting... i don't know if i said this before... but your descriptions are just wonderful and easy to actually picture the scene of your writes... this is an excellent talent you possess!! and you got the emotive part right in 'nature's wonder' ... take care! ~ Arany
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