Cool Waters

Deep is the water of the lagoon
filled with many kinds of things
the more you look the more you see
reflected clouds floating in the water

A host of wondrous plants on the banks
little fish darting hither and tither
tall reeds are casting mottled shadows
deep down a big catfish lies in ambush

The cool waters a pure bliss to watch
rippling waves setting off flashes
different colours glint and shatter
like light beams hitting coloured shards

The tranquillity of this magical place
calls out to me beckoning me closer
I lay on the grassy bank trailing a hand
in the soft water and feel I am restored

Keep this place secret just for us to share
come here whenever the outside world is too much
here a blissful peace awaits to bathe you
to bring comfort and soothe away the daily pains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Love it,,,, cool waters is also the name of a perfume by JORDACHE ;} happy fourth of July ;}
Hamilton Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 6:51 PM
hi Debbie yes it is a perfume happy 4th to you ty for your time reading Shadow x smiles
Horsman Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 12:16 AM
oh the oasis of poetry, really beautiful is this.
Hamilton Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 5:52 AM
Ty Harry glad it touched you Shadow x smiles
Raj Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:55 PM
I felt I saw it in High definition.....lovely...:):):):)Adarsh
Hamilton Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:46 AM
hi Adarsh ty lovely comment Shadow x smiles
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Shadow it sounds like a very tranquil place. Nature healing the mind, body and soul. I can really feel the Zen like stated it would bring. Warm Smiles, Connie
Hamilton Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 7:45 AM
hi Connie it does ty for your lovely comments Shadow x smiles
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