Cool Water

You are blameless to not swim,
Where water is ingenuously cool,
Too cool for fish to frolic,
Whoever heard of a Procrustean waterbed?
I am taking swimming lessons at the J.C.C.,
From Pasternak and Yevtushenko.
Cool water with cool air generates no breeze,
Calm as a dish.
The pen is mightier than the sword,
And even works as a good oar,
When there is no wind,
And sails luff.
© Chaim Wilson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:30 PM
your work shows great promise Chaim keep writing hugs
Wilson Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Thanks! Adlai Stevenson said, "Flattery is all right, as long as you don't inhale". So I'm holding my breath when reading positive responses like yours!
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