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Cool Water

You are blameless to not swim, Where water is ingenuously cool, Too cool for fish to frolic, Whoever heard of a Procrustean waterbed? I am taking swimming lessons at the J.C.C., From Pasternak and Yevtushenko. Cool water with cool air generates no breeze, Calm as a dish. The pen is mightier than the sword, And even works as a good oar, When there is no wind, And sails luff. © Chaim Wilson

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Date: 11/24/2014 9:30:00 PM
your work shows great promise Chaim keep writing hugs
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Chaim Wilson
Date: 11/24/2014 10:11:00 PM
Thanks! Adlai Stevenson said, "Flattery is all right, as long as you don't inhale". So I'm holding my breath when reading positive responses like yours!