Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Rhyme

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For the Skating Upon Saturns Rings Poetry Contest, 
Sponsored by Sara Jama

 

Cool Thrills Out There

Skating upon Saturn's rings, on the outskirts of gold,
executing my double axel, in the brisk, season of cold.
The sole sound is of ice skates, spraying bits behind;
In rich, purple dusk, of the chaotic universe entwined.
A wide-eyed dreamer, in the red heartbeat of fantasy,
does slow twirls and excited spins, jumping uncannily!
Skating on concentric rings-the adventure of her life,
Stars shining all together, a hundred moons in the sky.

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Ann Peck March 6, 2025 at 9:01 AM Your's is a beautiful fantasy, Evelyn! "...A wide-eyed dreamer, in the red heartbeat of fantasy..." Congratulations! Evelyn Judy Buehler March 6, 2025 at 1:05 PM Dear Ann, your lovely words of congratulations are received with much delight. Thank you. :)

Ink Empress February 25, 2025 at 8:12 AM Dear evelyn, how did i miss reading this gem! It’s absolutely gorgeous and flows so well and its so fitting for the prompt too! I love so many lines in this as well as the rhymes and cadence and your wordplay, so exquisite and pretty as always! I especially love the lines “ Skating on concentric rings-the adventure of her life, Stars shining all together, a hundred moons in the sky.” such an eloquent ending! A fave this is for me! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light always Evelyn Judy Buehler February 25, 2025 at 8:25 PM Thank you for your kind words, my dear Ink. Your remarks and your fave fill me with delight! It's such a pleasure to read your comment. Blessings and hugs. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2025 at 11:30 AM - A lovely fantasy, Evelyn :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Evelyn Judy Buehler February 24, 2025 at 2:03 PM Your gratifying remarks are very much appreciated, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Victor Buhagiar February 21, 2025 at 9:39 AM Wonderful write though of course one must suspend truth. No one can come to Saturn and live. Still great imagery. Evelyn Judy Buehler February 21, 2025 at 1:53 PM Thank you very much for your thoughts. Whether a dream or fantasy, I enjoyed writing this poem, which was a fun excursion to our lovely night skies. :)