Audrey Haick Poet Fibonacci

Cool Spring

Cool
spring
stirring
in silence
beneath winter’s breath,
its eternal magic potion
which awakens strength, life, love, hope and second chances
It is a gift that is freely given- renewed life and redemption for all that breathe.
~*~

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Michael Ainsley April 20, 2013 at 7:12 PM like this vary much ,full of light

Robert Pettit February 28, 2013 at 7:59 PM I've tried one of these writes before. What one usually fabricates is a pyramid-like poem. Yours is well written.

Jack Horne February 28, 2013 at 3:51 PM lovely write on this unusual form - I think I've only tried the form once

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2013 at 5:23 PM this one is very beautiful, dear. I enjoyed your cool spring!

Robert Pettit February 25, 2013 at 10:44 PM Very nicely done.

Harry Horsman February 25, 2013 at 1:43 PM wonderrful and very creative,,

Michael J. Falotico February 24, 2013 at 6:26 AM Top shelf Poetic form my dear sweet caring friend.. hugs Michael

Donna Jones February 23, 2013 at 7:25 PM Very breathtaking.......

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2013 at 6:24 PM Powerful work..Enjoyed reading this one today..The date on the comment was 2/21/2013..Sara