"cool Shade"

The shade travels swift
to shadow thoughts and savor
till the sun awakens..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:55 PM
loving the touch ,,, i do not mind the sun asking me to wake up...lol...pd
Sweetheart Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Wow Michael.. such an elegant write..luv.. very expressive and loving..my friend.. enjoyed..
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Looking forward to the shadows of evening..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Love how you used a double purpose for shade in this one! LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:29 PM
A nice haiku with fine images, Michael
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 2:47 PM
I love how the lines flows together with the corresponding sounds. Speaks well of nature.
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August 29, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Nice use of alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words with us. Karen
Richards Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Ahhhh....I like this a lot !! :)
Neels Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Beautiful haiku Mr F! Hope you enjoyed your time in the shade, luv Wilma
A   Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Good Morning Micahel, and a wondeful Sunday so far. Kidding it is hot here in Texas. However we do need a little swift shade to pass us over. The nights here are to short to a savor. By the time we know it the sun is messing up the refreshing feelings. Loved your haiku,..p.d.
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