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Do you realize it's hip to celebrate Shabbat? Tonight we gather here at the Little Synagogue Where sing healing songs and paray for peace More people should realize that Shabbat is "where it's at" More people should write poems and songs about this weekly day or rest Jewish Renewal can renew the soul I am not going to knock other faiths But we here at the Little synagaogue can hold our heds up high! The Jewish faith has been functioning for the past 6000 or so years Guess there is something to it wouldn't you say? g

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Date: 5/7/2012 3:26:00 PM
i like the way you express your joy at celebrating the sabbath and i love the ending of your poem. shabbat shalom (even though it's monday)!
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