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On the beach one night Neath a late-May moon My love bathed its light Lunar beams to swoon (Kindled hearts, attune) Just two young fools In cool spring flames Held close the dunes Glib passion's games Fire and ice Even's arc Did entice Cool spark Bare thaw ... Awe. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Pick A Title, Vol 12 - Diminished Hexaverse" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor. * This is Diminished Hexaverse that I also did in Rhyme and Reverse ABC * ( Syllables = 5x5, 4x4, 3x3, 2x2, 1, counted at HowManySyllables.com - I removed the apostrophe from 'Neath as the software will not count words that start with an apostrophe. Thank you! ).

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Date: 1/12/2020 3:56:00 PM
wow...it reads beautifully in reverse form as well...well done, congratulations on your top win :) hugs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/6/2020 5:46:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Sandra - blessings! <3
Date: 1/12/2020 1:27:00 PM
so impressive how you incorporated all the other elements into it. A very well deserved top spot!! Congrats, my buddy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/6/2020 5:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Andrea! <3
Date: 1/11/2020 3:52:00 PM
Well crafted, Gregory. Beautiful. Congrats on your top win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/12/2020 12:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line, I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 1/11/2020 2:52:00 PM
wow! what a great idea, very well done and deserving of a top win. Congrats dear friend x:-)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/12/2020 12:30:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Brenda - thank you so very much and a Happy New Year to you! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 1/11/2020 11:02:00 AM
EXCELLENT. Congrats to win
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/12/2020 12:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anisha - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 1/11/2020 8:36:00 AM
Takes me back to beaches of my youth. Congrats Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/12/2020 12:29:00 AM
I'm glad it spurned some good memories, Rob - many thanks, and I hope your holidays were bright! :o)
Date: 1/11/2020 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this very creative excellent poem, Greg!:-)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/12/2020 12:28:00 AM
Many kind thank-you's to you, Sir Edward - I'm so pleased you found it worthy! Blessings for the new year, my friend! :o)

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