Cool Brute Drum Dumb

cool brute drum dumb
classical knives high
above weeds buzz
-ed soldiers slip
though the grip
of tanks shooting
shells washing on
the sea strewn with
bodies white lime
-stones the bright sun
crosses the high
-way spitting cars
for miles and mile
-s wishing to be…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 8, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Hello Alex, . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)
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November 17, 2013 at 1:25 AM
this one HITS hard!!! The part about bodies reminded me of a scene in Hotel Rwanda.
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November 17, 2013 at 12:42 AM
wow.. Alex.. that was really something... love it...LINDA
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