Cool Breeze

.                     Nomadic whispers 
                            North winds speak to the great plains
                                            Warnings of winter

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Audrey Haick

September 26, 2009 at 5:28 AM

Excellent! Imagery says it all!

Moonbee Canady

September 23, 2009 at 2:52 PM

A Historical Haiku... About Everywhere How Cool Is That? Very! MoonBee

James Marshall Goff

September 18, 2009 at 6:28 PM

great haiku! Abe!...and thanks for your support!...jim

Raul Moreno

September 18, 2009 at 5:10 PM

Soup mail..

Charmaine Chircop

September 18, 2009 at 4:58 PM

cool breeze..warnings of winter..excellent haiku,one of your best--Charma:)

Veronica Joseph

September 17, 2009 at 12:21 PM

excellent, I can feel that nomadic wind down my back (shivering). I am holding onto every last shred of warmth I can

September 17, 2009 at 12:12 PM

I really like the opening line. Good use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

Raul Moreno

September 17, 2009 at 11:57 AM

This one is still my favorite, those winds whispered to me yesterday evening...nice work on this one.

James Fraser

September 17, 2009 at 10:15 AM

Ace Haiku Abe, delightful read>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 17, 2009 at 6:16 AM

Beautiful write. I lived in the mid-west and the southwest years long past. And this haiku whispers the reality of the plains. Beautifully simple. (Thanks for your comments today. Lovingly, Dane