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Cool Breeze

. Nomadic whispers North winds speak to the great plains Warnings of winter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/26/2009 5:28:00 AM
Excellent! Imagery says it all!
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Date: 9/23/2009 2:52:00 PM
A Historical Haiku... About Everywhere How Cool Is That? Very! MoonBee
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:28:00 PM
great haiku! Abe!...and thanks for your support!...jim
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Date: 9/18/2009 5:10:00 PM
Soup mail..
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Date: 9/18/2009 4:58:00 PM
cool breeze..warnings of winter..excellent haiku,one of your best--Charma:)
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Date: 9/17/2009 12:21:00 PM
excellent, I can feel that nomadic wind down my back (shivering). I am holding onto every last shred of warmth I can
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Date: 9/17/2009 12:12:00 PM
I really like the opening line. Good use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 9/17/2009 11:57:00 AM
This one is still my favorite, those winds whispered to me yesterday evening...nice work on this one.
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Date: 9/17/2009 10:15:00 AM
Ace Haiku Abe, delightful read>>James
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Date: 9/17/2009 6:16:00 AM
Beautiful write. I lived in the mid-west and the southwest years long past. And this haiku whispers the reality of the plains. Beautifully simple. (Thanks for your comments today. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 9/16/2009 11:50:00 PM
Very atmospheric write Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/16/2009 12:48:00 PM
One for my favorites, nice work on this one. It' amazed me when I read it...Raul
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Date: 9/16/2009 12:48:00 PM
Awesome write, Abe! "Nomadic whispers" conjures up quite an image. Oh, how I'd love to hear those "North winds" again! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2009 11:56:00 AM
Okay Abe but........please let us have fun with fall before the icy cold winter. Outstanding Haiku by the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2009 10:52:00 AM
Lovely Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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