Cool Breeze

Into the windows 
             of my mind 
    comes a cool, welcome breeze
   that cool breeze 
glides through brain cells 
         bringing a welcome sense
of freedom 
Let the motion of the moon and tides    
   govern you exsistence 
feel the cool breeze
Let it open up
   your chakras 
    You'll find the peace 
you seek 
As clouds disperse 
It seems that something
new has come along 
Bringing with it a powerful 
       new way of life 
    Containing multitudes, leaving sorrow behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 11:05 PM
This is very good, Matt, and thanks for your comment to me tonight. LUv, Andrea
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August 29, 2009 at 12:32 PM
This poem relaxes me. I enjoyed reading it. Nice write. Autumn
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August 26, 2009 at 8:31 PM
"Cool" poem Matthew! and thank you for welcomed comments on my poem also, yes, it was a scarey time, the doctors had told my family to make my final arraingements, but I had other plans! LOL ~Trudy~
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August 4, 2009 at 4:23 AM
Good Morning Matthew. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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