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bank teller successful innovative motivating achieving generating mover casanova one-night stand pill popper overlooking daydreaming fighting single-parent indebted bank robber Date: 05/31/2019

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Matthew Anish

Date: 6/1/2019 4:59:00 PM

An intriguing poem! I have never used this form myself. Nice juxtaposition of bank teller and bank robber! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/1/2019 5:07:00 PM

Venture the wit of you to tempt a try my friend Matthew, Aloha William

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/1/2019 4:24:00 PM

There is such a hilariousness here! What a fantastic diamante. It makes me want to try another one.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/1/2019 4:59:00 PM

Go for it Caren, guaranteed a read! Aloha William