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Cookie From the Rookie

Crying...with a wet diaper 
The two-year-old boy weeps 
Mom and dad still sleep 
His five-year-old sister awakes- hyper 
She thinks- "I'll give him a cookie" 
The boy stops bawling- good thinks, by the rookie 

Bite Size Poem No28 Poetry 
Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 
11/29/2021

Copyright © Charles Messina | Year Posted 2021

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Line Gauthier Date: 11/13/2022 8:57:00 AM charming ~ Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 12/6/2021 10:06:00 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing wise observation in poetic lines. God bless you. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 12/6/2021 9:56:00 AM How sweet and so tender Charlie - big sister knew just what to do! Congratulations on your win! Here's to the innate wisdom of rookies with cookies. Hugs and much love coming your way. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/5/2021 11:24:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Leave it to a kid to help a kid. Have a blessed day................ Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 12/5/2021 8:05:00 AM Interesting write. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/4/2021 6:05:00 AM Hi Charles, great thought trail by the older sister, toddler loved the cookie and your poem is a cutie. Best wishes for the contest my friend. Hope you are well and keeping safe, hugs, blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/2/2021 6:21:00 PM This poem is so cute that I could pinch its cheeks, Charlie. Here's to a winner in the contest! Happy Holidays, Gershon Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/29/2021 1:07:00 PM Cute! Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 11/29/2021 2:50:00 PM Thank you, Heidi :)

Mike Gentile Date: 11/29/2021 11:37:00 AM She is a smart sister Charles!! What a cute poem, love the title !!! Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 11/29/2021 2:51:00 PM Thanks, Mike. I appreciate the visit and nice comments!

L Milton Hankins Date: 11/29/2021 8:30:00 AM A very clever little sister, methinks. Most enjoyable, Charles. Login to Reply Charles Messina Date: 11/29/2021 2:51:00 PM Methinks, she is! Thank you, Milton.