Charles Messina Poet Light Verse

Cookie From the Rookie

Crying...with a wet diaper 
The two-year-old boy weeps 
Mom and dad still sleep 
His five-year-old sister awakes- hyper 
She thinks- "I'll give him a cookie" 
The boy stops bawling- good thinks, by the rookie 

Bite Size Poem No28 Poetry 
Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 
11/29/2021

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Line Gauthier November 13, 2022 at 8:57 AM charming ~

Beata Agustin December 6, 2021 at 10:06 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing wise observation in poetic lines. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman December 6, 2021 at 9:56 AM How sweet and so tender Charlie - big sister knew just what to do! Congratulations on your win! Here's to the innate wisdom of rookies with cookies. Hugs and much love coming your way.

Paula Goldsmith December 5, 2021 at 11:24 AM Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Leave it to a kid to help a kid. Have a blessed day................

Christuraj Alex December 5, 2021 at 8:05 AM Interesting write. Congratulations!

Jennifer Proxenos December 4, 2021 at 6:05 AM Hi Charles, great thought trail by the older sister, toddler loved the cookie and your poem is a cutie. Best wishes for the contest my friend. Hope you are well and keeping safe, hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf December 2, 2021 at 6:21 PM This poem is so cute that I could pinch its cheeks, Charlie. Here's to a winner in the contest! Happy Holidays, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2021 at 1:07 PM Cute! Charles Messina November 29, 2021 at 2:50 PM Thank you, Heidi :)

Mike Gentile November 29, 2021 at 11:37 AM She is a smart sister Charles!! What a cute poem, love the title !!! Charles Messina November 29, 2021 at 2:51 PM Thanks, Mike. I appreciate the visit and nice comments!

L Milton Hankins November 29, 2021 at 8:30 AM A very clever little sister, methinks. Most enjoyable, Charles. Charles Messina November 29, 2021 at 2:51 PM Methinks, she is! Thank you, Milton.