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Cookie From the Rookie

Crying...with a wet diaper The two-year-old boy weeps Mom and dad still sleep His five-year-old sister awakes- hyper She thinks- "I'll give him a cookie" The boy stops bawling- good thinks, by the rookie Bite Size Poem No28 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 11/29/2021

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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2022 8:57:00 AM
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charming ~
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Beata Agustin
Date: 12/6/2021 10:06:00 PM
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Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing wise observation in poetic lines. God bless you.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/6/2021 9:56:00 AM
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How sweet and so tender Charlie - big sister knew just what to do! Congratulations on your win! Here's to the innate wisdom of rookies with cookies. Hugs and much love coming your way.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/5/2021 11:24:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Leave it to a kid to help a kid. Have a blessed day................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/5/2021 8:05:00 AM
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Interesting write. Congratulations!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/4/2021 6:05:00 AM
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Hi Charles, great thought trail by the older sister, toddler loved the cookie and your poem is a cutie. Best wishes for the contest my friend. Hope you are well and keeping safe, hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2021 6:21:00 PM
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This poem is so cute that I could pinch its cheeks, Charlie. Here's to a winner in the contest! Happy Holidays, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2021 1:07:00 PM
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Cute!
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/29/2021 2:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Heidi :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/29/2021 11:37:00 AM
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She is a smart sister Charles!! What a cute poem, love the title !!!
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/29/2021 2:51:00 PM
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Thanks, Mike. I appreciate the visit and nice comments!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/29/2021 8:30:00 AM
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A very clever little sister, methinks. Most enjoyable, Charles.
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Charles Messina
Date: 11/29/2021 2:51:00 PM
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Methinks, she is! Thank you, Milton.

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