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Coo, Coo, Coo

Early in the morning just beyond daybreak, the cooing of doves
Coo, coo, coo always in threes, conveying to its mate of his love
Soon sun will be higher, proof of love will begin with the feedings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/11/2010 9:08:00 PM
Very well made. One of my favorites from you.
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Date: 6/7/2010 1:23:00 PM
Nice one Sara, how are you today. Mighty hot here down south Texas. The only time the birds want to be out and about is early morning. Love your little sijo, smiles to your ending,..p.d.
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:26:00 PM
this is coo coo COOL, Sarah. I enjoyed it alot. Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:20:00 PM
Great Sijo, Good luck in the contest. i have doves every morning too and I love their coo cooing. Love, Joyoce
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:42:00 AM
I agree with Dr. Ram, enjoyed much your third line! Nice Sijo, Sara! Thank you so much for your kind comments and hope you had a nice weekend...Gert
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:29:00 AM
Truth is aboveall. very much appealing. hunger and thurst necessary object. Only love cann't survive in empty space. justification is too higher. well doen
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:01:00 AM
What a nice twist in the third line. Wonderful thought
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