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Convallaria

Bursting with life Striving for light Breaking the mould- A glimmer of white, Scents the Spring cold Inspired by A Lily of The Valley bursting through a concrete paving flag

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Lena Pate

Date: 5/2/2009 8:34:00 AM

A fight for life in our concrete jungle. Inspiring.

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/24/2009 11:22:00 AM

A beautiful write, you can see it blooming right before the eyes.

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/23/2009 7:41:00 AM

Brian this is quite simply a very lovely poem on many levels - God Bless you - MJ

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/22/2009 7:23:00 AM

My friend, you are unfailing in your energy to bring genius to th eye of good ... and may I thank you too for your comments on my work. one love

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/22/2009 6:53:00 AM

The most beautiful, seemingly fragile beauty finds its strength and pushes through. A lovely vision in many ways. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/22/2009 4:07:00 AM

This is a well done piece my friend...love the life and how you described it....thanks for the comments on my work Brian.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 4/22/2009 2:37:00 AM

Oh, my favorite flower. :) lily of the valley is the best! Beautiful portrayal of this beauty. love, Kristin