Control This Domain

As we lay down our heads,
the darkness fills my sight,
thinking, dreaming, wishing, wanting,
for everything to turn out right,
Hope fills me as fantasys block reality,
dont want to wake up
from this beautiful nightmare,
i control this domain,
the feel, the power,
gets stronger as i get hungry for more,
kicking, screaming, pleading to stay,
light floods my vision,
Back into reality i awake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 9:07 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Britt , Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Britt, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 8:53 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Britt. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2010 at 10:09 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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