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Control

...a self-analysis So this is all there will be from now on, since I've made up my mind to depart; no more TV, no talking, no people, no fun, no more girlfriends who play with my heart. I'm a timid and tremulous creature, always wearing my soul on my sleeve; I can't for the life of me step on a bug but I simply don't know how to leave; how to leave things behind when they're done, how to let go a friendship that's dead, not to disinter love when it's all in my mind, and take charge of my own life instead. It's all just a question of balance, why must I suffer such pain? if I see life as good judgment, good sense, then I'll get my control back again!

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Date: 3/18/2009 3:43:00 AM
Hello Keith this is an excellent write. One can certainly identify with self analyzation and finding a healthy medium/coping techniques in order to gain that balance one seeks. I thank you for sharing the read my friend. God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 3/17/2009 11:31:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Yes, life is about balance. I like the way you end with hope. I think most will relate to this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:46:00 AM
Well written introspective. We poets are just too emotional. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:41:00 AM
I love this look into your life..I love the breakdown of things in this piece.. so many questions sometimes Keith and yet no answers. Well done.
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:40:00 AM
Top o'the morn to you Keith! This is a deeply reflective piece...a total shutdown. I suppose that in the silence ("no more tv, no talking, no people, no fun") this might be the best way to recover your "balance"? It's St Paddy's Day..may the sun shine down on you, and drive away those snakey shadows. Happy St Patrick's Day, Keith!! Love, Mikki
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