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Contrary Wonderland 3

Plight plays pretty prose Deed defies dense dose Clever charms coast close Love leaves legacy Meet most minds motley Hell hurls hurts hotly ~~~~~~~~~ Fire frees form fleeting Measure moves meeting Succinct self seeking Love lifts life lofty Laughter loves loosely Live language lovely ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 22 March 2015 Singapore

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/25/2015 4:39:00 AM

Nice pen Leon! I truly enjoyed your nice alliteration piece,dear friend. A 7 from me! Thanks for sharing. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/25/2015 9:22:00 AM

Dear Dorian: Thank you for your kind words. All the best then, Leon.

James Horn

Date: 3/22/2015 8:24:00 PM

Leon, Not sure if close is like being near something or when you close a case or the blinds. English sure is tricky, isn't it? Jim Horn

Leon Enriquez
Date: 3/23/2015 7:05:00 AM

Dear James: Yes it is. This is an allusive poem, and the reader is left to interpret it as he or she sees it! Thank you. Leon