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Contradictory Past and Present

Dating, Oh! so much fun doing new things This person is perfect in every way Movies, pop corn shared, touch, a brush__ heart sings Just want that caress, the arm around_ stay Now awaken to another day_ no play No brushes, that gentle caress gone, left Control norm making demand; no sun rays No I will not go to a movie_ deft Dying on the inside daily Longing for love, acceptance, fun again Could be just a walk in the woods_ babe Sitting close or lying on couch in den Soon I'll be gone no longer home __near I'll go out to find myself, my soul, love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 10:10:00 PM
is this really all you long for 'again' like you said, Sara. this is sad.i don't understand why you cant have fun): ..well, maybe, i know i don't entirely.so sad. `Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:20:00 AM
The beat of this sonnet moves it along nicely. I like the alternating rhyming scheme and how they interplay in each stanza. This piece certainly paints a picture in the eyes of the reader. Sad or glad; it's bad! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:07:00 AM
sad...
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Date: 7/8/2010 11:15:00 PM
The bane of togetherness but growing apart! YOu told it well, Sara. SEe ya later, I better get off here soon. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2010 8:00:00 PM
Scooch over Sara...this way, a little closer, I don't bite ! Pass the pop corn will ya ! *smiles* Have a great comfy night Sara. Great warm poem ! A little sad, yet just right. james
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Date: 7/8/2010 3:55:00 PM
How lovely.. a wonderful Sonnet full of expression.. hope u are drinking your water like a good girl and remember every glass counts as a blessing... keep the faith.. enjoyed your creative write ..am leaving the islands tomorrow for the 17 hour plane ride home..miss my family and pets.. my babies.. so see u soon .. with luv.. "Sweetheart" ..Linda-Marie..
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Date: 7/8/2010 2:00:00 PM
great write sara. i really enjoyed the flow of it. that new dating feeling is exciting and it does suck when it is no longer there.
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Date: 7/8/2010 10:29:00 AM
This is neat Sara, and so true of relationships of humans in life. Excellant content. Thanks for your comments today. Agape, Moses
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