Contradicting Me

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Contradicting Me

I'm a man of contradictions
I know just how it seems.
A travesty a tragedy
a man of such extremes.

Each time you pull me closer
you're pushing me away.
I'm silent for awhile
then I've got a lot to say.

I write of peace and happiness
while broken deep within.
I'm leaving for forever
or til I come back again.

Sometimes I hate the shadows
but still I love the night.
I hate the lies that people tell
and hide them from the light.

Still I tell of love undying
and things still yet to be.
I say I hate the lying
but still I lie to me.

I say that it will be ok
no matter where I go.
I say that it will be alright
and I don't even know.

A shining light to many
but yet I am ill fated.
Loved by one here and there
by others I am hated.

I'm a man of contradictions
I know just how it seems.
A travesty a tragedy
a man of such extremes.

Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/8/2015 8:44:00 AM
I believe every word in this poem, except the title. It should be called, "Thief in the Night!" You come to SOUP without so much as a SPOON, your cheering section roars and 360' accolades pour in and you pull the "Disappearing Act!" Get it together Hofert, you're not too good or too bad to reply to anyone who comments on your poetry. Take 2 aspirins and call us in the morning!
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/8/2015 10:54:00 AM
Well my goodness, He walks, He talks, He's there! Now I'll go take the two aspirins! Meanwhile master mind...I came up with one sentence that fits your style..in between your hammering, trains, hungry dogs and your missing homework...put this poem/song together: " if you leave me all I got left is downhill" Fill in the blanks your way.... It would make a damn good country song but I sold my piano...can't play or sing...Go for it...make it a Hofert
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/8/2015 9:10:00 AM
I'm sorry. No I'm not too good. :) I have been in the middle of a remodeling project for hire and it seemed that even the time I took to write a verse here and there I had to steal. Also I had a flat tire and was stopped by a train only to discover my dog ate my homework. :) Seriously I'm sorry. Will try to get caught up today. I've missed everyone. God bless Ed
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