Continual Autumn

Quote 2: "Observe the wonders as they occur around you. Don't claim them. Feel the artistry moving through and be silent. ~Rumi ~ Old pages torn from ancient trees with sage remarks upon the breeze break silence, one by one Catch them, hold them, before they flee and listen to the past, unseen for strong roots to lean on
............................... For Nette's Contest: Rimee couee: By Carrie Richards 4/20/12
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Guzzi Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 1:06 PM
If only trees could talk! Congrad's on Your win Light & Love
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May 10, 2012 at 7:07 PM
Excellent poetry from you Carrie!Congrats on your win.This goes to my Favs.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.
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May 10, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations onyour win.
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May 10, 2012 at 3:46 PM
Great comparison...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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May 10, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Excellent piece,Carrie.Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette`s contest....
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May 10, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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May 10, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie!! Well Done! Beautiful write!!! :) love ya deb
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May 10, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Carrie congrats on another win..David
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April 24, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Beautiful poem Carrie!!! xoxo Laila
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April 24, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Such a beautiful write Carrie ! Have a blessed week dear poet....much love, james
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April 23, 2012 at 11:40 AM
beautiful piece here, Carrie - love the quote too
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April 22, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Smile ˜ Reminds me of the psalms and proverbs ˜ And there is nothing new aneath the sun ˜ Except, my love You baby, tis seems new everyday, sweeet beautiful Carrie ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜
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April 22, 2012 at 4:37 PM
...."I Love You Baby" *
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April 22, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Carrie...I absolutely love the phenomenal messages in this poem...the opening is just mesmerizing! All the way to the top, girl...You are a master! Love, Gwendolen
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