Contemporary Haiku - Catie Lindsey - My Rewrite -Tanka
Caties Poem
Children play and scream
in a world at war
school bell rings
MY POEM: Tanka
Children play war games(5)
we laugh as they run guns raised(7)
Prized birthday gift toy (5)
church bells, war heroes at rest (7)
Mothers sad good-byes, guns kill!(7)
Catie Lindsey's contest
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