Contemplation of Life's Path

"The artist should paint not only what he has in front of him but also what he sees inside himself." Quote by Caspar David Friedrich on his painting "Wanderer Above the Sea of Fog."
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Gazing at man gazing distant mountains
Fog stretches below, before both gazers
Non-dominant foot forward, weighing mind
Will taking risks benefit one's skilled life?
Is contemplation enough to see same?
Fog of lies tries to mingle truth at sky

A humble stick not enough to scale heights
Yet, is handy along the reeds, rambles
The choicest feet prefer to leave no marks
Far away rocks promise solid comfort
Taking perilous path is Hamlet's task
Life, a known journey towards unknown. See.
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Happy/Blessed Easter Day......
mysore Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 7:35 PM
I am glad I could make it dear friend, thank you so much for your kind visit and words. I am grateful to you for your cheerful wishes and blessings dear poet. Happy you too.
Layne Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Philosophical for sure. Congratulations, Thrive!
mysore Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 7:33 PM
that is lovely.. thank you dear friend for your kind words and visit, means so much. thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 7:47 PM
Wow the fog of lies line was stunning. Lovely poem here
mysore Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 9:10 PM
Thank you dear poet for your pleasant visit and kind words. I liked that painting, where shade of fog and sky is nearly same, so I got that line. Thank you very much.
Buehler Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 1:59 PM
Thriveni, this marvelous work captures the mood of the painting, wonderfully well. Captivating!
mysore Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 11:25 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and words dear poet. As you say, 'Captivating painting' it is. Thank you very much.
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