Contemplating Sewerage Pipe

I stand on the cliff’s edge and look down,
The falling stones, I hear their resound.
I close my eyes to feel the winds embrace,
I sense its touch all over my face.

I’m alone,
No fear...
The white waters pound the rocks below,
If I fall...
Who would know.

This is my selfish experience
My life is of little significance
The coward’s way out
I feel the wind moving about

Its blowing on my back as if to say jump
It would be all over in a minute with a thump
But like something invisible keeping me on
Though I see the happy things in my life all gone

I decide not to do it, to step away
Then a sudden scream I heard, aimed my way
“What the hell do you think you’re doing?”
I slip over the edge with my face all screwing
I scream and start to bawl
“Urrrrrh!!!!! Arrrrrrrrrrrsehoooooooooole!!!”

The fear I now feel racing through me veins
And the pain I'm about to feel rushing through me brain
I helplessly lash out at the cliff edge 
And manage to grasp hold of a protruding bit of veg
I’m brought to a holt like a snap of a whip
Then snap, crackle and pop I’m moving again to finish of my trip

I hit the rocks with a promising thud
I punch the air and say “Thank you me Lard” 
Well I was air lifted to hospital with, a dislocated shoulder broken ribs and two leg bones,
If it weren’t for that hiker I would be ok walking home...

Ps some where amongst that bit of veg
If you ever climb down you'll see me teeth stuck on the cliff's edge

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/16/2012 7:32:00 AM
I went looking for those teeth and never found them. What are you doing with yourself? Ar4e you drying up like me? Frustrating isn't it? Miss you - luv Lizzie
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Date: 12/13/2011 11:55:00 AM
Your punishment is more than I can bear Sid, nexty time you get into trouble let me know; I don't know what I'll do with you though - give me time to think about it. :)
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:26:00 PM
I hope ur al right...i have to check now..lol..Nice wrk again sidney..quite different from 4m other one's
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Date: 12/6/2011 7:10:00 AM
a bit depressing, although entertaining...still sad...go back to the funny happy ones! i hate to read the sadness within your words.
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:12:00 AM
Sid, do you need someone to go in search of your teeth?? Let me go :) enjoyed this wild trip, hope you are doing okay, love Wilma
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Date: 12/5/2011 9:55:00 PM
hahahaha. I think this was all made up. I hope so. Or I am laughing about something that was not so funny!! I sure got a kick out of this, especially that last line!
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