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That I could soar and glide effortlessly o'er snow-capped colossal mountains, watch my visionary dreams pile up and up, contemplate the winding harrowing paths that led to chilly but charming cascades, with their aquatic pleasures, all exquisite bliss. How my exuberant heart would delightfully sigh like a whispering zigzagging mountain breeze! Would it lose its rhythmic beat, as it grows taut with desire? Its moans echo among the vales and crevices, while meadows are covered with yellowish narcissus all fanning fragrant and sweet perfumes. So I sat still and contemplate the beauty of life. Placed 1 3 February 2023 Writing Challenge - C Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/8/2023 4:15:00 PM
Wonderful! There were countless times when I sat just there watching/observing the beauties of life.
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Date: 2/8/2023 8:07:00 AM
Victor, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - C Words, well done, I like your image too, Constance
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Date: 2/7/2023 9:13:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your wonderful win. To be in awe of God's amazing work. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 2/7/2023 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations with this beautiful poem. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/6/2023 10:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Victor! Like a breath of fresh mountain air, your contemplation summons the beauty of nature. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/6/2023 6:02:00 AM
Touching musings dear Victor. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/6/2023 5:17:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Your visits to my page encouraged me. Sara
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Date: 2/5/2023 4:19:00 PM
This is an absolutely stunning piece, Victor. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on your win.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/5/2023 10:02:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/5/2023 9:20:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I’m living in your poem. Such beauty and peace, it’s magnificent.
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Date: 2/5/2023 8:33:00 AM
Dear Victor, my imagination is captivated by the poetic splendor of your gifted pen. Oh to soar and glide o'er such a place would indeed make one's "exuberant heart delightfully sigh".. and yet my earthbound heart feels the exuberance of such a flight and delightfully sighs even as I sit and contemplate the beauty of your verse, such is the power of your poetry, my friend. Oh to be that "zigzagging mountain breeze"! Your wondrous imagery brings me to the center of your heart's imagination. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 2/5/2023 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, I have doubts about my poetry. Still thank you for such a eulogy.
Date: 2/5/2023 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful write Victor, best wishes in the contest
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Date: 2/5/2023 6:59:00 AM
A mesmerizing view from your excellent word-painting my dear friend Victor. I love it and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Good luck and best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:22:00 PM
Love this Victor you put us all there in the wind experiencing it all. Thanks for sharing my friend...
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Date: 2/4/2023 10:14:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Contemplating life is something we should do every so often. Thanks for sharing and dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2023 2:08:00 AM
A splendid poem Victor. Your ability to paint pictures with words is commendable.
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Date: 2/3/2023 8:50:00 PM
Contemplate on the charming creation of God, that's what you have done beautifully here, Victor:)
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Date: 2/3/2023 8:18:00 PM
Lovely landscape seen through the eyes of a nature lover ! There is much for a sensitive soul to contemplate on the beauty of Nature. All the Best in the contest dear Victor!
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Date: 2/3/2023 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and feeling my friend.
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Date: 2/3/2023 7:14:00 PM
Lovely sceneries, such as pure early spring traveling over the stunning scenery on scented winds, are portrayed here. Victor, I love this wonderful poetry.
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Date: 2/3/2023 4:34:00 PM
Such lovely imagery yet also the vast and difficult path…yet to find such beauty, we must climb its heights! Bravo!
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Date: 2/3/2023 3:26:00 PM
Pure Poetry, Victor I think your poem is a winner for sure. I hope you are having a pleasant weekend. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 2/3/2023 11:30:00 AM
Great images in this visionary dream. Wonderfully contemplating beauty of life, Victor. Best to you.
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Date: 2/3/2023 10:58:00 AM
A great write/picture. If one will really look then one will be in awe of God's amazing work. Have a great day................
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Date: 2/3/2023 10:41:00 AM
you definitely have a poets heart Victor, love the scented poems you write, :)
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Date: 2/3/2023 9:47:00 AM
O wouldn’t it be heavenly to soar and glide effortlessly - a wonderful scenario in poetry Victor. Best wishes… Belle
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