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Contamination

your dulcet words from your lips slipped into my bloodstream and filled my heart with desire but now even those delightful words sting like poison contaminating my mind, infecting my soul ~4-8-18~

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Date: 4/18/2018 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win again!
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Date: 4/16/2018 2:10:00 PM
Back with more congrats on this podium win, Pailey.
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Date: 4/16/2018 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. A sad, beautiful, thought provoking and poignant message. Kai
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Date: 4/11/2018 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem.
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Date: 4/10/2018 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Pailey.
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Date: 4/10/2018 7:13:00 PM
I'm reminded of the 'weight of words' here by your wonderful, winning write: As my fave poet, Emily Dickinson wrote: A Word is Dead//When it is said//Some say//I say//It just begins to Live//That Day...Congratulations to you, Paley. Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 4/10/2018 10:33:00 PM
Thank you for your very thoughtful comment! I'm glad that I reminded you of someone so great in the history of poetry!

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