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Consuming Grapes and Pickles

consuming grapes and pickles dig deep passed the shovel filled with detritus don’t whine about today tomorrow already eats the clock ideas dance like sugar plum fairies Through a head cotton wool as Pooh’s brain storms turn to chaos ideas fade leaving tantalizing hints of their greatness if they had been captured like finches in a fine net pickles and grapes tart and sweet is life consume them at my desk my memory numb, lacklustre prompted with fruit and pickled cucumbers.

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 3/17/2018 1:31:00 AM

Your metaphorical genius comes out. I just dig it

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/27/2018 7:06:00 AM

Some classic lines in this, Patricia, enjoyed reading:)

John Fleming

Date: 1/23/2018 7:09:00 PM

Glad to be reading your poetry again, Patricia...as always it makes for compulsive reading. My very warmest regards! In affection :) john P.s I am off to bed! Got a well earned week off now. :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 1/23/2018 9:55:00 PM

Thank you John. I hope your week is wonderful.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/23/2018 5:22:00 PM

So many lines of deep meaning, in your poem Patricia! ...."tomorrow already eats the clock".."brainstorms turn to chaos"... "captured like...". I feel this well written poem kept the ideas dancing, never letting them fade.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 1/23/2018 6:13:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I have had a downward dog sort of time recently.

Silent One

Date: 1/23/2018 2:36:00 PM

Does not sound like a good combination, this is a ddep poem Patricia..

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 1/23/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you. I actually tried it not so much.