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Constructing Catacombs

Constructing Catacombs Desirous death, a submersed breath, the walls in a carious crumble Living life, a surgical serrate strife, as we stand surreal and stumble Baneful blood, a feverous flood, the temerarious towers will tumble Terranean tears, fertile fermenting fears, a famished fatalistic fungal Corpses mounting high, Angels in the sky, reuniting dead and divine Perpetual praying, love’s lost laying, as we build their sacred shrine For we question why, we deceitfully die, within the abortifacient vine Blue clouds of clay, casually chip away, as the minstrels drink their wine The new Babylon, do we belong, beyond death's door is still unknown Faith be quick, do we get to pick, a heaven or hell that we have sewn Odious obstruction, of deaths destruction, mankind comes to mourn Caught in oblivion, a denunciative delirium, and thus we are reborn. Nov.08.2017 PREMIERE CONTEST NO 110 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/9/2017 1:51:00 PM
Wow WW...That is really good writing... even frightening...I wrote what you suggested and it's a far cry from what I've read from you today...All the best my friend
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:39:00 AM
Brilliant WW...
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:39:00 PM
A melancholic poem my Dear WW with such a deep meaning, culminating in the oblivion of the unknown but then hope rising it's wings out of the ashes - In a rebirth. Your choice of music is also so moving and your verbiage is impeccable. Well worthy of taking first place in the Contest - Bravo and a Fave from me...Maria - many hugs :)
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:10:00 PM
Great write WW..,.like the phenix..we are reborn...
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Date: 11/8/2017 7:16:00 AM
Wow! Now I am gonna spend my next five minutes trying to get the meaning of all those complicated terms in your really wonderful poem, ^WW^:)
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:33:00 AM
Wow WW, another very powerful poem and very well written. You have a way of putting amazing words together in expressive lines in your poems. Have a nice day :)
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:14:00 AM
Very good WW! I have seen the catacombs...surreal and freaky! You want to touch the wall but you feel the sacredness of it all. Life is so precious. A fave of mine! God bless you my dear friend! <3
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:09:00 AM
Your poem is so well written WW--depicted in precious words of rhyme--a specialty I see in all your poems--best for a win!
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Date: 11/8/2017 4:23:00 AM
Wow, this one is very deep and thought provoking my friend! You have delivered a powerful message here with a twinge of hope somewhere within the confines of your incredible piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
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