Hansteven Selfa Poet Rhyme

Constellations

I connected the stars I found in the dark horizon,  
hoping I would form a new constellation.  
It was a sense of felicity, a joy I couldn't part 
'til I found myself connected to your heart.

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Manmath Dalei April 12, 2016 at 12:10 AM Well written. I enjoyed..............love

Anand Parmale April 3, 2016 at 9:16 AM Han at his best.....Sometimes I feel you are a true lover,sometimes a dreamer but many times I find you to be a flirt....But whoever you are, you are the best for sure.....

Timothy Hicks April 2, 2016 at 2:12 AM Out of the three I've read so far, Han, this one stands out the most to me. Very sweet and succinct. I bet whoever this is written for would be just tickled pink by it.

Shirley Rebstock April 1, 2016 at 6:38 PM A lovely romantic poem

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2016 at 6:53 PM a lovely poem, Hansteven. PD

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2016 at 4:05 PM wow, this is a really short and sweet poem. Love it!

Constance La France March 30, 2016 at 3:32 PM Hans, BEAUTIFUL and I am loving this 7!

Eve Roper March 30, 2016 at 3:18 PM Very romantic and wonderful flowing write, Hansteven, a 7 Hugs Eve

Bl Devnath March 30, 2016 at 2:32 PM Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 1:39 PM A wonderful poem with superb flow..:)-luloo

Joseph May March 30, 2016 at 12:02 PM You have once again delivered a great poem HS... Keep up the good work..