Constanza

I don’t need the flowers, vases
Sure they’re pretty on the table 
But they’re proof we live a fable 

Trips to warm, exotic places
Could bring the love that we let go 
Back to us; we can take it slow

All I want are your embraces
Let’s try a few, to remember
Where we were, just last September

I know you’ve been other places -
I’m asking you to give them up
A year’s gone by, a year too much

With them around, I am faceless
Please try to see me, here, instead
Rekindle this love; leave their beds




I don’t need the flowers, vases
Trips to warm, exotic places
All I want are your embraces
I know you’ve been other places -
With them around, I am faceless

8/31/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/26/2012 5:52:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2012 10:03:00 AM
Susan, :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2012 2:11:00 AM
Belated Congratulations sweetie xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2012 9:40:00 PM
A very sad touching write. Beautifully written and a well deserved win. Congratulations Lee
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2012 8:47:00 AM
Winsome and woeful. Congratulations Susan. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2012 5:13:00 AM
congrats on your win Susan...splendid
Login to Reply
Date: 9/22/2012 1:00:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend, Susan!! hugs:) Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2012 11:54:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2012 11:25:00 PM
CONGRATS SUSAN ON A STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR WIN LUV .. STATED AND WRITTEN SO WELL .. IMPRESSIVE PIECE LUV.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2012 9:01:00 PM
SUsan, what I liked most about your entry was the "realness" of it. How it has such a modern feel to it. I especially loved those lines like "we live a fable" and the raw feeling expressed in that third stanza. Congrats on your win in my contest. Luv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2012 8:25:00 AM
Lovely verse...the one for whom you have written this surely is a "love coward"... Cynthia
Login to Reply
Date: 9/9/2012 8:29:00 AM
nice write Susan....best wishes in the contest ...hugs...Joseph
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2012 11:10:00 AM
strong stuff there susan. like it
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2012 10:47:00 PM
It reads very nice...But I hate to say it Constanzas aren't for me. Ha,ha..I just can't do them? It's plain to see you can...Very nice. :o)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2012 11:54:00 AM
That is what most women want is to be loved in words, deeds, and physical expression..Thanks for stopping by..Great expressive work..If for the contest, reads like a winner...Good luck..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2012 11:15:00 AM
i drool over the sentimental flow of your words, susan.. this is s winning material for me... thanks for the wonderful journey i went through for your recent contest; much honored..:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2012 10:26:00 AM
Wow!!!! This is a very wonderful write and entry, Susan. You got a perfect theme for your constanza. This is a winner for me!!!! Thanks a lot for sharing and thanks you for reading and appreciating mine;although, I think I need to improve more. Thanks for everything especially for your encouragement, inspirational comments and making me win in one of your contests. Million thanks to you!!! hugs:) leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2012 2:51:00 PM
wonderful poem, sad though, good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2012 2:09:00 PM
lovely constanza, Susan - a sure winner here. Thanks - loved the contest : )
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2012 3:15:00 PM
This is a fabulous and incredible write my friend! That third stanza is truly the greatest one of the bunch! It speaks volumes just within its small about of words that you wrote! This is a stupendous piece, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2012 2:02:00 PM
A lovely poem B.E.S. - Flowers can say many words, after a while they will die. Faithful love - tenderness - one and share your life with - Love that never dies, it is the dream and wish. Thank you for your beautiful poem B.E.S. Wishing you a beautiful weekend. oxox love / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2012 12:56:00 PM
Exquisite constanza, Susan. I like the smooth flow of your writing. Good luck to you in the contest. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2012 12:50:00 PM
I really like your constanza. The last verse is a great poem on its own.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad