Considerations a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

CONSIDERATIONS
unconscious
  reverence
  profoundly
different
sit
tendency
 hope
is the spring
exquisite
& mysterious

the forgotten
 fact
 supposed
enough
 by these
existential moments
 became more
abstracted
prefiguring
  diversion
or expectations

 purely derivative
of  condescension
deepened
with every
passing
 illustration
precipitated
in
bright colours
& pattern
 of
inventive genius
 in
 plain sight
ignored by
generations
of
reminiscence
  romanticised

authentic
proof of
supposition
 that reveals
 more about
the fantastically
once
suppressed

 a proliferations
suppressed
of
 fiction
active assertive
&
&overdone

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