Considerable Shine
It's only
For the good of us
If we aren't
Open to ethereal
Beauty
And considerable shine
The sky would darken
The rain would fall
If we aren't open
To our exquisite
Lives
And our considerable shine
Poorly won
Fought in war
Lost forever
Into the black hole
We don't decide
Who stays and fights
And inevitably we lose
Our considerable shine
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