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Consciousness of Conscience

Inspired by Syed Wakil Ahmed by Michaelw1two Blissful peace; verses instability, violence, and disorder, harmonious relations intervene, wicked minded interloper; world's jactation spreads, amidst deflexion by war's aper, segmentation of life hosts, exemplifies mind's distemper. Grant control, rein heart's pride, control vice's constraints, seek to follow mystery clear, don accoutrements of saints; grope no words in death's fervor, thirst of living queint, drink deep of past relations, in minds of men reacquaint. Feed fulfillments probable, dream vivid vision's expectation, shout in soul the glorious tune, salvation, life’s elation; emulate will of peace, reach higher for mental causation, trust in seed that breeds deeds, rekindle love's foundations. Sense in conduct moral thought, alter minds of wicked men, guide wayward souls to bold goals, as now a change begins; speech enthralls troubled hearts, ear words heard so bends, gatherings wide end madness' strife; pure light now descends. Aware in individual power, changes grant being's eternity, fully fight, in battles smite, modern fascist's amorality; peace is earned in generous sums, defeat for wars duopoly, relationship of mind and soul, bests corporate monopoly. January 2010

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Date: 9/19/2013 8:23:00 AM
Good morning Michael, Very thoughtful write... Clever... Such thoughts cause me to read your poem twice. I apologize for not being grabbing the right concept.. however, I enjoyed the metaphors,.. a deep pen to share... enjoyed... Linda
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michael walkerjohn
Date: 9/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
Aloha Linda... Thank you for your read and these close and personal comments... Political writes are a difficult effort... the abstract approach, I have used is the best way I can use to describe my feelings... you cannot be so direct and be able to post on most sites... please visit often... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.
Date: 9/19/2013 7:51:00 AM
I see what you mean. Words and phrases dialectically positioned and conjugated into an author's thoughtful meanderings. I do understand. Deep and profound work. Allan
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michael walkerjohn
Date: 9/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
Aloha Allan... Thank you profoundly for your read and these insightful comments... I have found the proper way to reply to your comments... many of my works are to long to post here... search michaelw1two and catch me in the cloud... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michael.