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Consciousness Correction


“Watch that thought, ego begot ~
Be thee oh hermit, self-taught”

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Is each touch gentle
in heart’s love temple,
offering healing
with sincere feeling?

Playing our life role,
do we seek control,
spawning thoughts shoddy,
serving mind-body?

Unvoiced low intent
scars the joy current,
for which we atone
alone, on our own.

There are no shortcuts,
as conscience rebuts
each thought not love inked ~
God’s counsel’s succinct.

01-May-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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