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Oh, my unforgiving consciousness, Stop torturing me with guilt for each of my past crimes, Why don't you remember, for once, The pious deeds I have performed, in the old good times?* © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 January 2021 * Consciousness remembers easier our crimes more than our good deeds!

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Michael Tor

Date: 1/11/2021 8:55:00 PM

This message resonates with everyone that is honest with oneself Demetrios. We are all sinners in the eyes of God. Remind your conscience that you are forgiven by our Lords blood and you are a new man, and are transformed into trying to not repeat those painful acts. Blessings my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/11/2021 11:07:00 AM

Wonderful rhyming verse and thought provoking, we have to assess ourselves regularly, and our consciousness is like our shadow, if follows us everywhere. Like this verse a great deal. well penned Demetrios Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2021 5:02:00 PM

Bless you, dear Jennifer, for your lovely visit and comment! Take good care, my friend! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2021 10:51:00 AM

... at least we can learn something from "our past" ... "in the old good times" - Something to think about, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2021 10:59:00 AM

Wonderful to see you again my dearest friend Anne-Lise. Thank you! Hugs xxx

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/11/2021 9:01:00 AM

For checks and balances otherwise, consciousness is bias...Good one Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2021 9:54:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Arturo. Blessings. Take care!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2021 6:22:00 AM

So true and well said! Awesome flowers!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2021 7:39:00 AM

Thank you very much for your gracious visit and comment dearest, Vijay!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/11/2021 1:36:00 AM

Funny how that happens Demetrios, is it guilt that makes us do it. We're often our own worst enemy. Have a great week. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/11/2021 1:53:00 AM

So true my friend, Tom! It seems that God within us wants to constantly remind us of our crimes so as not to repeat them in the future. Hope we learn! Thank you and blessings my friend. Take care!