Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Quatrain

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" REMEMBERING " MY PHOTO, ©

Consciousness' Choice

Oh, my unforgiving consciousness,

Stop torturing me with guilt for each of my past crimes,

Why don't you remember, for once,

The pious deeds I have performed, in the old good times?*








© Demetrios Trifiatis
     11  January 2021

* Consciousness remembers easier our crimes more than our good deeds!

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Michael Tor January 11, 2021 at 8:55 PM This message resonates with everyone that is honest with oneself Demetrios. We are all sinners in the eyes of God. Remind your conscience that you are forgiven by our Lords blood and you are a new man, and are transformed into trying to not repeat those painful acts. Blessings my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos January 11, 2021 at 11:07 AM Wonderful rhyming verse and thought provoking, we have to assess ourselves regularly, and our consciousness is like our shadow, if follows us everywhere. Like this verse a great deal. well penned Demetrios Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Demetrios Trifiatis January 11, 2021 at 5:02 PM Bless you, dear Jennifer, for your lovely visit and comment! Take good care, my friend! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2021 at 10:51 AM ... at least we can learn something from "our past" ... "in the old good times" - Something to think about, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis January 11, 2021 at 10:59 AM Wonderful to see you again my dearest friend Anne-Lise. Thank you! Hugs xxx

Arturo Michael January 11, 2021 at 9:01 AM For checks and balances otherwise, consciousness is bias...Good one Demetrios. Demetrios Trifiatis January 11, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you my friend, Arturo. Blessings. Take care!

Vijay Pandit January 11, 2021 at 6:22 AM So true and well said! Awesome flowers! Demetrios Trifiatis January 11, 2021 at 7:39 AM Thank you very much for your gracious visit and comment dearest, Vijay!

Tom Cunningham January 11, 2021 at 1:36 AM Funny how that happens Demetrios, is it guilt that makes us do it. We're often our own worst enemy. Have a great week. Tom Demetrios Trifiatis January 11, 2021 at 1:53 AM So true my friend, Tom! It seems that God within us wants to constantly remind us of our crimes so as not to repeat them in the future. Hope we learn! Thank you and blessings my friend. Take care!