Jean Omalley Polatnick Poet Quatrain

Conscious Beings

Being of a conscious form
Seeing, aware of the view
All your thoughts and wonders born
We have our patterns and blunders too
It can be hard, and we can be torn
While creating this brilliant hue

Growing, intending to teach
Sewing a fabric never complete
Spreading awareness, hoping to reach
Showing fairness and kindness replete
And yet, in this world with so much of each
Still, we yearn for a sense of sweet

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Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:44 PM Congrats on your win, Jean :) Jean Omalley Polatnick July 31, 2015 at 7:30 AM Thank you! Btw, I stopped by your wall and loved your work!! : )

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 30, 2015 at 1:19 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning work Jean! Amazing! Look forward to reading more of ur work! Jean Omalley Polatnick July 30, 2015 at 7:02 AM Love your kind words ... THANKS!!

Sara Kendrick July 29, 2015 at 3:25 PM Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara Jean Omalley Polatnick July 29, 2015 at 6:26 PM Thanks so much, Sara!! <3

Lee Carter July 29, 2015 at 2:29 PM Congrats on your win Jean! ~lee Jean Omalley Polatnick July 29, 2015 at 6:25 PM Thanks, Lee! I appreciate it!

Ovidiu Bocsa July 16, 2015 at 10:30 AM Being of a conscious form... I enjoyed your poem.Congrat,Growing, intending to teach... Jean Omalley Polatnick July 16, 2015 at 11:23 AM Thank you! So glad you enjoyed!!