Conquering Love

Sparkling eyes open Jubilant heart palpitates Conquering love sighs (C) Demetrios Trifiatis 22 July 2015

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Jack Ellison

Date: 7/23/2015 3:12:00 PM

If you were a lady... LOL Cheers, Jack

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 1:07:00 AM

Jack, this is impossible, I AM GREEK! Ha-ha.

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/23/2015 11:15:00 AM

Ah, anyone would love to be be in this moment, sire. Lovely thoughts on this 'ku! Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 5:38:00 AM

Yes, this is true, dear Kim. Wish everyone to be there. Thank you so much for your kind visit and lovely comment.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/23/2015 1:06:00 AM

Beautiful haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Tks

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 5:37:00 AM

Ravi, my friend. So good to see you again. Thank you.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2015 6:09:00 PM

Be still my heart...lovely

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 5:36:00 AM

Oh, yes, my friend, Tim. The heart "could sell a piece of the soul to satisfy its desires!" Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2015 3:34:00 AM

- This Haiku need only one word: BEAUTIFUL + A 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/22/2015 7:34:00 AM

Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your beautiful comment!