Connections

Connections

To the water’s edge for solitude
Life rippling near river’s bed
Prayers lifted now in gratitude
As burdens heavy cloak is shed

See my brothers
See my sisters
Drifting now in foreign lands
See the members
Of my family
In each and every clan

At the water’s edge in solitude
Tears mingling with life’s stream
Visions of connections interlace
As realities overlap the dreams

All Rights Reserved by Debra Squyres 3/12/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Rutherford Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Congrats Debra,excellent poem! xx Anne
Jones Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations Debra ....:-) Donna.
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March 20, 2013 at 4:51 AM
Debra such a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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March 18, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Debra, Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD
Johnson Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Beyond the shores of flesh and blood the spirit knows the way. To go and join the many souls who live in yesterday. They have not gone so far away that we can not believe. That when we travel down that road, it's them that we will see. Connections! Without a doubt Debra. Such a beautiful poem. Peace. :)
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:04 PM
Tears mingling with life's stream...love this Debra
Situation Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 7:17 PM
yes this one is exceptional. it is one of the better ones i've read today. artful.
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March 12, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Deb; When I first saw the title - I didn't know whart kind of connections this poem was about. You wrote a great poem here. The last stanza says it all. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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March 12, 2013 at 3:34 PM
This is yet another brilliant write by you Debra, such a fantastic poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this afternoon! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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