Connecting These Two Friends

Many people do really make good friends
but they've different traits that attract the other
so one responds to one and indeed vice versa
then it works in unison so to go on further

When one is wise people stand in awe
pointing to that one seems to know it all
but real true wisdom creates in the heart
a sense of gratitude to stand and stall

What a beautiful twosome they do make
wisdom marked with gratitude simply divine
the wise reveal within the inner heart
seeking to find a gratefulness to shine

So the wonder of connecting these two
like an electric light when you switch
to the on position the dark is gone
light comes to rescue you from the ditch

Try and live full of these two
for it's wise to be truly grateful
as well as being grateful is wise 
this being instilled shows one graceful

(Some thoughts on connecting two friends of gratitude and wisdom.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/21/2019 2:21:00 PM
I really love the way you’ve put this delightful poem together Gordon. It made me think of my closest friend and how we met. It was just as you said! Like a light switch flicking on :-) x
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/21/2019 2:56:00 PM
Hi Elaine, Glad you loved this one and brought good memories of friendship, thanks for your kind encouragement. Hope all is good with you my good friend. :-)x
Date: 8/2/2019 9:57:00 PM
Just what makes two people become friends is a mystery sometimes, but the act of accepting each other's differences is what matters most in any relationship... I really enjoyed reading your inspiring poem this evening Gordon... Very well written and expressed!
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/3/2019 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Kelly, so good to hear from you again and glad you enjoyed it, trust all is well with you. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Date: 7/15/2019 3:21:00 PM
Making a true and lasting friend is a rare thing indeed, and having taken the decision, it will prove to be a wonderful partnership for the rest of one' life - friends forever! Great write gordon! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/15/2019 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Jenny, glad you were impressed and thought it great. Hope all well with you, at present down in the English lake district spending our time at Keswick Bible Convention, the weather is really warm. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
Date: 7/12/2019 2:47:00 AM
Wonderful words...
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Date: 7/15/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, glad you thought they are wonderful, hope you're having a wonderful day, Blessings,Gordon
Date: 7/11/2019 8:20:00 PM
G'day Gordon … true friends always are there for each other no matter what. I did enjoy your poem Gordon - Lindsay
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Date: 7/12/2019 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, glad you enjoyed this one, hope all's good with you, blessings, Gordon
Date: 7/11/2019 7:15:00 PM
They say opposites attract... a friend of mine always wrote happy... I wrote darker tones yet when her and I collaborated we wrote beautiful poems together. Your poem reminded me of those times :) hugs
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Date: 7/12/2019 2:45:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, Glad you liked it and it brought back good memories of collaboration producing lovely poetry. Blessings and hugs, Gordon
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