Connecting

The first flight left on time
And landed at the proper gate,
But someone took its parking place
And so we had to wait.

We didn't have a lot of time
For our connecting flight
And heavy rain just added to
Our still unfolding plight.

The pilot taxied 'til he found
A place to park the jet. 
We had to dash to buses,
So we all got soaking wet.

We found the listing for our flight,
Most likely fully boarded
And ran to get our passports stamped;
Impatience still rewarded.

With twenty minutes 'til our plane
Would take off to the skies,
We raced full speed, most grateful
That we're fit from exercise.

We made the flight with minutes left
Until they shut the door,
A closer call than any other
That we've had before.

We caught our breath, sat down and smiled,
Our peace of mind restored
Except for one small worry -
Did our luggage get on board?

(P.S. I wish it weren't so.
Alas, the answer turned out No!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/12/2014 1:35:00 PM
You took me on this airport adventure every step of the way....sorry about the luggage.... But glad you made the flight....hugs Tim
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/12/2014 1:56:00 PM
thank you tim! it was a day filled with anxiety but since we did make the flight, i can't complain too much (except in rhyme!). appreciate your taking the time to comment...
Date: 12/12/2014 12:12:00 PM
Been there, no luggage..your poem is so cute and so right on. You have to be of strong spirit to travel..lol. BG
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Date: 12/12/2014 1:53:00 PM
thanks, barbara! it was a very stressful day but we made it home. now i'm playing catch-up. appreciate your comment...
Date: 12/12/2014 10:08:00 AM
- So boring ..... to wait and wait .... really hope that luggage is on board - Great written, Ilene - Marry Christmas to you and your family :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/12/2014 1:52:00 PM
thank you, anne-lise! hope you have a merry christmas, too!
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