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Contest: Moments of Reflections - Haibun
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury
~3rd Place~

 Entered, July 1, 2026,
 In The Premiere Contest  
"Keeping God-Search Simple" 
 Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker

Connected With God

Line Of Inquiry:
“Of the fact we are alive, we are sure
All else scriptures say, may or may not be
So presence vibrant, heart pure and demure
As formless awareness we become free.”

The feeling that God exists, for most, is deeply
ingrained in our human consciousness, and this
is true because humans have always expressed
their knowledge of Him in so many different ways~
and those mystical paths are limited to our mode
of expression. So we must go beyond our mental
or a visual interpretation of what God is and simply
feel deep emotion inside, that inborn warmth
which makes us feel and know, deep within, that we 
are somehow very much connected to our Creator. 

faith thrives deep within
the gift of soul we're born with~
connected with God
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations on your win. BW ~ Mala
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