Connect the Dots

ink bending over
                                             folding words
                                          on a twister board






MagiCicada 13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Letts Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:48 AM
When the messages are deciphered all the dots merge into pictures. Very succinct use of the descriptive.
Neumann Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:44 AM
I second Andrea. A very powerful image. I am starting my day with it in a double sense. This writing addiction of mine...Thank you for sharing, Kai
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Hah, yeah ;) less of an addiction for me, more a tendency. Thank you Kai, xomo
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Great image, Maureen!
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August 6, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thankya :)) xomo!
Ellison Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 5:43 AM
You're always such a playful thing, dear Mo! Cute! Love HJ XOXOX
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August 5, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Jack! To find your love before I go looking for it, how wonderful! Must be going to be a smashing day! Clearing the sand from my eyes, doubly blessed I got a trophy in "Your Favorite Poem From August 2017" ...pinch me baby! xomo <3
Kitchin Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Love it!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Thank you Tania! ;)) xomo!
Lawless Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:58 AM
AH, yes TWISTER.....the ultimate game of foreplay....Love the metaphor
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Thank you! Yeah that it certainly is... writing about my writing; I do suppose I'm a bit of a tease at times ;) Thank you for indulging! xomo
Nance Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:42 AM
I like this :)
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August 4, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Cheers! Thank you Casarah! :)) xomo
Cunningham Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 1:49 AM
Don't see it much now Maureen the computer has taken over. Progress they say. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:38 AM
True dat. Progress implies a positive directional trajectory, yup, a "so they say" ;) xomo!
Roper Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Cute , I used to love to connect the dots with my boys. Enjoy reading hugs Eve
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Thank you Eve :) xomo!
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