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Connect the Dots

ink bending over folding words on a twister board MagiCicada 13

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Cliff Letts

Date: 8/13/2018 4:48:00 AM

When the messages are deciphered all the dots merge into pictures. Very succinct use of the descriptive.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/6/2018 2:44:00 AM

I second Andrea. A very powerful image. I am starting my day with it in a double sense. This writing addiction of mine...Thank you for sharing, Kai

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/6/2018 7:51:00 AM

Hah, yeah ;) less of an addiction for me, more a tendency. Thank you Kai, xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2018 2:04:00 PM

Great image, Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/6/2018 7:50:00 AM

Thankya :)) xomo!

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/5/2018 5:43:00 AM

You're always such a playful thing, dear Mo! Cute! Love HJ XOXOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 6:14:00 AM

Jack! To find your love before I go looking for it, how wonderful! Must be going to be a smashing day! Clearing the sand from my eyes, doubly blessed I got a trophy in "Your Favorite Poem From August 2017" ...pinch me baby! xomo <3

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/4/2018 10:30:00 AM

Love it!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Tania! ;)) xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 8/4/2018 6:58:00 AM

AH, yes TWISTER.....the ultimate game of foreplay....Love the metaphor

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/4/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you! Yeah that it certainly is... writing about my writing; I do suppose I'm a bit of a tease at times ;) Thank you for indulging! xomo

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/4/2018 6:42:00 AM

I like this :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/4/2018 7:40:00 AM

Cheers! Thank you Casarah! :)) xomo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/4/2018 1:49:00 AM

Don't see it much now Maureen the computer has taken over. Progress they say. Tom

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/4/2018 7:38:00 AM

True dat. Progress implies a positive directional trajectory, yup, a "so they say" ;) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/3/2018 10:36:00 PM

Cute , I used to love to connect the dots with my boys. Enjoy reading hugs Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/4/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Eve :) xomo!