Mick Talbot Poet Concrete

Congratulations Sandra

a  concrete walk
                          paved  and  gray
                    a path that brought
                 you a win this day
               –––––––––––––––
                i thought  it would
                   concrete  delight
                     zigzagging  good
                       by Sandra Haight
                       ––––––––––––––
                       along  the  shores
                      of  my  memories
                     laughs  and  cors
                   and  cups of teas
                 ––––––––––––––
                like life must  end
                 paths  have to too
                  i do sincerely send
                   congratulations true
                        your virtual friend
                            Mick E Talbot

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 5, 2018 at 7:42 AM This is fabulous Mick! :) Mick Talbot May 5, 2018 at 9:43 AM It wouldn't of happened had it not been for your contest, (maybe?), thanks, Maureen! How about another concrete one based on a theme? It would be interesting to see all the different takes on it.

Tom Cunningham May 5, 2018 at 2:13 AM Lovely tribute and concrete Mick. Tom

Susan Gentry May 4, 2018 at 12:33 PM Congratulations! This is awesome! A fantastic CONGRATULATIONS to a fantastic POET for a fantastic CONCRETE POEM!!! Mick Talbot May 5, 2018 at 9:35 AM lol Thanks, Susan, couldn't have said it better, ;-) Mick Mick Talbot May 4, 2018 at 5:07 PM Thank you, Susan, on all counts. Mick

Sandra Haight May 4, 2018 at 10:08 AM Wow, so honored I am, Mick! Such a lovely and thoughtful congratulations! Love your concrete verse! Thank you so much, virtual friend! :) Mick Talbot May 4, 2018 at 5:04 PM A pleasure Sandra, my thanks on all counts. Mick