Confusion

If Life Then death, right mom? Wrong son, If Death Then Life If Life Then death, right dad? Wrong son, If Death Then Death If Life Then death, right? Wrong Wrong Wrong So mother So father If right Then wrong?

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Skat A

Date: 10/12/2013 10:18:00 AM

Hello John, stopping by to see if you had a new one......................SKAT

Skat A

Date: 10/8/2013 7:09:00 PM

Hello John, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2013 1:39:00 PM

Welcome to P-Soup, John ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2013 1:28:00 PM

hello Hohn ,intresting and deep. I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"