Confusion

A mirage of thoughts
Swirling in my brain.
Lies.  Deceit.  Truths untold.
	Doubts.  Hopes.
		Dreams.  Fear!
			Hate.  Love.
				War.  Peace.
Ideas wanting to come out,
But finding no way of passage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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April 20, 2010 at 12:15 AM
Not bad. Again, very Japanese. I think that is where you shine, with such sharp, concise imagery.
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