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Confusion

A mirage of thoughts Swirling in my brain. Lies. Deceit. Truths untold. Doubts. Hopes. Dreams. Fear! Hate. Love. War. Peace. Ideas wanting to come out, But finding no way of passage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 4/20/2010 12:15:00 AM
Not bad. Again, very Japanese. I think that is where you shine, with such sharp, concise imagery.
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