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Confusion

We stand up
We gather our weapons
We band together
We fight
We battle
We win
We gain power
We are commoners over 
Emperors
We are the powerless with 
power

They came
They rebelled
They fought
They conquered
They are Royalty to us 
peasants
They command God
They are power high

Ecstasy running through 
everyone’s veins
The order of things thrown into 
mayhem
Chaos controlling everything

Who are the leaders?
Who are the followers?
Who are the winners?
Who are the losers?
Who are the royals?
Who are the normals?

The leaders are followers
    Followers are leaders
The winners are losers     
    Losers are winners
The royals are the normals
    Normals are royals
Everyone is everyone.

Copyright © Christian Guild | Year Posted 2013

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J.W. Earnings Date: 4/20/2014 4:15:00 PM haha here's the rating...sorry, Christian. Login to Reply

J.W. Earnings Date: 4/20/2014 4:13:00 PM Wonderful questions injected in this write. Awesome imagery and this one earns a 7 and favoriting it. :DD GOOD JOB! The rhythm was pretty cool too! This sort of made sense to me...hardly any confusion here. ~ DWB Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 11/11/2013 8:00:00 AM Great message. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/24/2013 7:33:00 PM True, it's all a matter of perspective. Light & Love Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/19/2013 2:03:00 PM Christian, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/9/2013 9:29:00 PM Christian, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT" Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/4/2013 12:25:00 PM about your poem: I like the confusion we live in day by day. I especially like this line,,, The leaders are followers Followers are leaders The winners are losers Losers are winners..... who are? We are! enjoyed...LINDA Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/4/2013 12:23:00 PM Christian, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA Login to Reply